Friday, 13 December 2019
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Kia Ora Jorja
ReplyDeleteThis is Charlotte from the Summer Learning Journey program, I am so excited to see that you have been participating in our Summer Learning Journey!
Your Day 2 entries were very cool to read and I can see that you have put a lot of thought into them. Both Jean and Amelia were very amazing women weren’t they? They both were able to overcome barriers in order to achieve their dreams. What is your dream job?
I like how you used plenty of adjectives (describing words) in your poem about the moon - it really helped the reader to imagine you there! Would you ever want to go to the moon?
The story you wrote about your brother was so inspiring! He definitely sounds like a person you can look up to and aspire to be like. He is very brave.
When reading your blog posts I found it quite difficult, have you embedded a google doc into your post? If so to make it easier to read I would recommend copying and pasting the text from the doc.
Use Ctrl Shift V to paste your text into your blog post.
You could also insert an image or drawing
to help readers connect with your text.
Hei konā mai
Charlotte
Kia ora Jorja,
ReplyDeleteWell done for starting the Summer Learning Journey and getting this post up on your blog.
You might like to visit Ruby-Rhain's blog to see what she did with this activity and leave her a comment. Copy and paste this link to go to her blog:
http://matawairuby-rhainm.blogspot.com/2019/12/today-i-was-learning-about-comparison.html
I am looking froward to seeing more posts during the holidays,
Mā te wā
Mrs Torrie